Write about the following topic: Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Learning
global
Add an article
a global
show examples
language
is more essential than learning local
languages
. If individuals do not know it would be high risk. In my opinion, everyone has to learn
English
. Without
english
Change the capitalization
English
show examples
life would be very useless because we can not catch a lot of opportunities.
Firstly
,
English
is
a
Change the article
an
show examples
indispensable
language
for The community. There is just one way to speak with
foreigner
Replace the word
foreign
show examples
people and that way is
English
. Pupils have to learn
English
in private and public schools because it is a pressing need. Research conducted by CNN revealed that without knowing
English
, verbal communication would be challenging
therefore
, Tutors should start teaching
English
from
Change preposition
in
show examples
elementary school.
For example
, If pupils know
English
they will increase
the
Change the word
their
show examples
chance of
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
finding a good job
Also
, they can take a scholarship due to
English
. But we can not say the same thing for other
languages
because they are not international
languages
. Knowing
English
is
also
beneficial for
internship
Correct article usage
an internship
show examples
.
Secondly
, In my
opinion
Add a comma
,opinion
show examples
knowing
English
is
a
Change the article
apply
show examples
super necessary for helping tourists but we can not communicate with them
by
Change preposition
in
show examples
local
languages
. The number of local
languages
is too much,
therefore
, he has to focus
Change preposition
on
show examples
one
Correct your spelling
on
show examples
language
and
this
language
should be enough
in
Change preposition
apply
show examples
everywhere.
English
is a very practical and useful
Correct your spelling
language
langauge
Correct your spelling
language
. Research conducted by CNBC revealed that knowing local
languages
does not sufficient
therefore
The crowd should tend to
English
. İf the community does not know
English
they can not reach knowledge
it
Correct pronoun usage
which
show examples
will
leads
Change the verb form
lead
show examples
so
Correct your spelling
to
show examples
many issues.
For example
, Pupils are studious but they do not know
English
therefore
, They would not maintain projects. Individuals can not maintain life without knowing
English
. People should curb themselves and start to learn
English
instead
of learning local
languages
. In conclusion, without
English
knowledge, being
a
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
successful
Replace the word
success
show examples
in life is
a
Change the article
apply
show examples
very ridiculous. Because we will see
English
in every part of
area
Add an article
the area
show examples
. If we learn
English
would be beneficial for us
instead
of being
a
Change the article
an
show examples
obstacle.
Submitted by brsson06 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: