it is important for people to take risks,both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

As humans’ lives are always under the impact of different factors and everyone does

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best struggles to gain an ideal level of

life

, some risky decisions should be taken to change or stunningly improve the quality of living.

This decisions

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may be in personal

live

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or in a

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person's

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parson's

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career. In my opinion, it

is vary

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from one to the other person and the consequences should always be considered. To commence with, some personal matters are

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a kind of

luck

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event in our

life

and the risk of their happening is unavoidable, like

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marriage which is often contemplated as a risky issue, you cannot certainly say how your

life

would be, after

this

event.

Although

the decision is yours to try your

luck

or not through

this

type of

choices

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.

On the other hand

, investment in professional

life

, like

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financial subjects

are

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another obvious example of taking risks. I know someone who placed all his money on bets of soccer matches and earned a large amount of money, but it is a fact that

such

kind

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of risks may result in a big loss of money rather than a promotion.

Therefore

it would be the most

wisely

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decision to deliberate the consequences of

luck based

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works. To sum up, from all the items

have

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been told formerly, I can conclude that

,

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taking risks either in an individual or professional

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totally depends on the condition of the person, and participating

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luck

factor in

life

would not have the same result for all. So on, for one its advantages may outweigh the disadvantages while the same decision may have an adverse effect

for

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another person.