Some people say that in the modern world it is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, say that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Currently,
people
can always see the
citizens with Correct article usage
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tired
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a tired
face
and weak Fix the agreement mistake
faces
body
walking on the streets, and Fix the agreement mistake
bodies
these kind
of Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
person
did become the focus since some of them got Fix the agreement mistake
people
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a disease
disease
or even died because of their irregular breaking time. As the result, more and more Fix the agreement mistake
diseases
people
starting to join in the discussion about Correct your spelling
whether
wheather
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whether
people
can easily maintain a healthy lifestyle or not.
It is reasonable for people
who claimed that it is hard for them to be healthy to keep their opinion that they do not have this
kind of living habit because of the heavy working tasks and the highly
pressure from Replace the word
high
the
society. By giving them an example to support Correct article usage
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this
statement, as more and more new people
come into the
society, the elder workers need to work harder than before to maintain their social status while they Correct article usage
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also
need to finish more tasks for competitate
a higher position or get a Correct your spelling
competitive
get a
higher salary, and Remove the redundancy
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that is
why they always eating unhealthy food and living with an irregular schedule --- They need to save time. They can only order delivery and work until the
midnight.
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On the other hand
, there are
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also
some method
to keep healthy in all these cases, and there are some Fix the agreement mistake
methods
people
who did it. To show a person I know as
the instance, he is working in a small shop, but his life is healthier than most of us. He just Change preposition
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do
20-minute relaxing exercises after working, Change the verb form
does
and
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drink
a cup of milk just before he Correct subject-verb agreement
drinks
go
to bed, and Change the verb form
goes
wake
up with no pressure in the morning because he Correct subject-verb agreement
wakes
know
it is another start for a beautiful day. He never Change the verb form
knows
smoke
, and only Change the verb form
smokes
drink
a little bit Correct subject-verb agreement
drinks
wine
. Even the doctor said that he is completely healthy.
In a nutshell, you can live healthy if you can have a regular habit for that. It is not Change preposition
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necessary for a higher social status, as long as you are happy.Correct quantifier usage
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