the topic: Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?
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people
claim that everyone should have an opportunity to schooling but for many people
in the world it is still unavaliable
and they have to invest huge money in Correct your spelling
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, at this
time it is necessary to have many skills like reading, writing or counting. For
instance
if someone will not be able to get obligatory abilities that person will struggle to get any job. Add a comma
instance,
Moreover
, an employer for sure will not pay a person who will not manage to do primary duties. Second
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we are learning how Add a comma
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it is Add a comma
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shapeing
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, a possibility to learning should be for everyone, beacuse
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion