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Nowadays, there is no need for museums and art galleries anymore. Since everything is accessible through internet. People can find any historic fact there. Do you agree or disagree. Give reasons and examples of yours personal knowledge.

#museums #art #galleries #internet #people #fact
Many people claim, that, at
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internet is full of information about
history
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, in a consequence many
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institutions
instytutions
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institutions
 whiches exist to show famous and ancient
exhybitions
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exhibitions
 are not really needed. I truly believe that many facilities linked with wonderful art or ancient time are necessary to
stays
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 open for viewers. In
this
 essay I am going to shed light on it is advantages.
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 the
internet
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 we can discover
many
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 fake information. For
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instant, the most popular source of
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knowledge
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"Wikipedia" provide
informations
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 about many aspects,
nevetheless
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nevertheless
, everyone can add their own facts.
Although
, places like
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museum
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 or art
galeries
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galleries
 "can tell" the
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.
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,
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aforementioned
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aformentioned
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aforementioned
 places give
an
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 opportunity to see as closest as we can an
exhibitons
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exhibition
exhibitions
,
in
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 opposed to
an
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 internet where we
are not be
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 able to see details
on
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 the pictures or videos. 
Thirdly
,
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an area
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area
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 with historical character always will have
special
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 place in a tourist's heart. As a
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, plenty of cities earn money
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 the tourism sector.
On the other hand
, sometimes people can not afford to go
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 a journey
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 the other end of
world
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, so they have a chance for
virtual
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 tour on
muesum's
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museum's
 website. In my opinion;
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bases on my experience,
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historicial
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historical
 places bring many treasured aspects into our life. As for me see visiting "The National Gallery" and
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 by my own eyes Van Gogh's
masterpiece
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 was like a dream come true.
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