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Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter • Thank them for the photos and for the holiday • Explain why you didn’t write earlier • Invite them to come and stay with you

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Hello Jamie and Kyle, I hope
this
 letter finds you well. I’m writing to show my gratitude to
both
 of you for the amazing hospitality you
both
 showed during my holidays at your place in Dubai. And thank you for the pictures you shared through the post which remind me of those wonderful days I spent there
last
 month. These fantastic pictures which I received today in
this
 morning are amazing, they reflect how fantastic hosts you
both
 were. When I was planning
this
 holiday trip, I thought I might need a tour guide who help me to look around but you
both
 were wonderful and guided me to the best places to visit. Sorry I didn’t write to you earlier, due to some emergency in my office
although
, I was on leaves my boss called me urgently. I was working on some projects and the clients want some quick revisions so I have been working flat out since the day I arrived home. Anyways, now I am free and I am eagerly waiting for
both
 of you to visit my house and give me a chance of hospitality. I have two guest rooms here, you are welcome to use them whenever you like. Hope to see you soon, Maham
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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