Children should always follow their parents’ advice. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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are
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on their
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and unable to figure
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out by themselves in most cases.
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some people agree that
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should not ask for
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advice, in my opinion,
children
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should always take advice from their
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to ensure the best for themselves. Experience in
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is a thing which is irreplaceable.
Children
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apparently might find something correct,
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, deeper consequences can only be understood by the
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with their years of
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experience
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experinces
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experience
.
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,
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are sometimes not aware of the harmful aspects of many
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. They decide to go for the
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that seem fun to them while
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can actually enlighten them about both the positive and negative perspectives of something. People might argue that letting
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decide
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their own will make them independent and
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confident
conifident
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confident
. While
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is partially true, we must keep in mind
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the limitations of a child's
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capability
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. At the same time,
parents
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should give liberty to their
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to decide on
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like picking a hobby, choosing
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favourie
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favourite
genres of books, playing
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sports and other personal choices. While
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advice
advices
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from
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help
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to understand their own good,
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should
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let the
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decide for themselves regarding personal choices.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • parental guidance
  • crucial
  • life lessons
  • best interests
  • life experience
  • understanding
  • challenges
  • invaluable
  • independence
  • critical thinking
  • relying solely
  • hinder
  • beliefs
  • desires
  • generational changes
  • rapid pace
  • social and technological changes
  • outdated
  • applicable
  • digital age
  • necessitating
  • balance
  • tradition
  • modernity
  • deeply ingrained
  • value
  • evolve
  • honoring
  • deviating
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