Some feel that individuals should try to assimilate completely to the country where they live while others feel it is more important to preserve their native culture. Discuss both side and give your opinion.

In recent times, some people migrate from their

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to other countries in search of

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or

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educational subjects.

Lifestyle

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of them can somehow be changed during

this

process.While there may

be exist

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some new traditions and cultures in

destination

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country

or town,yet,some individuals

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content

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that they

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should

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should

preserve their civilizations. In the following essay, I would argue both perspectives as well as give my

sincer

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sincere

viewpoint. As far as I know,it is an indisputable fact that various countries and even

country

towns vary greatly in terms of language,

costom

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custom

,culture and religion.Assigning the approach in which,

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mankind

turn

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to a new

deweller

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jeweller

dweller

who

give

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respect to the principles of

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country

is favourable to

such

countries as France.For reaching

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goal, France

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applied

applid

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a number of unethical laws . A salient instant of them is about “hijab matter”. In France,

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is banned as well as other religious symbols- like Jewish hat and Christian cross- by

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government.

Although

this

country

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forbidding

forbidden

forbidded

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any official work-jobs like schoolmistress or bus

driver-and

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all office

works

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for whose use (

for example

) hijab,there are still some local Fellows who stand beside Muslims ,

Jewishes

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Jewish

and Christians against

this

amoral law. Little wonder, there held a number of demonstrations and campaigns for the sake of

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issue. In stark contrast, there are Iranian families for

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. Several Iranians and especially previous generations- chief among them,grand parents-are firmly

convenced

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convinced

that her/his grandson and

granddaughther

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granddaughter

who migrate

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abroad, for the sake of high education, should take care of their culture and wear traditional clothes. By

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of conclusion, I certainly argue that

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or

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the

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custom

or culture of a new

country

should be optional for each

newcommer

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newcomer

to what

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they respect to laws and norms of the

country

they live in as well as keeping their moral values like religious matters.