Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Internet is becoming necessary in all aspects of our lives; we depend on the
things
that integrate the internet
into it, especially the Capitalize word
Internet
gadget
with Fix the agreement mistake
gadgets
featured
. Replace the word
features
However
, even though for some people
, these things
will be beneficial to gather people
, I believe that social media
on a personal gadget like Twitter or Facebook negatively affects younger generations to build personal relationships. Exclusively, they neglect their presence in real life
and lack social sensitivity.
Usually, people
who enjoy their time on social media
neglect their presence in real life
. They prefer to communicate via text or videos and post their daily activity on social media
rather than meet people
face to face. Sometimes they focus on the things
that happen on social media
but do not realize the things
that happen in their closest environment, for instance
, simple things
like the name of their neighbourhood. If this
happens for a long time, the younger generation cannot form personal relationships and will lose social sensitivity.
On the other hand
, some people
think that social media
will help individuals connect positively. For example
, people
do not need to travel to meet others, which saves them time and money. However
, even though this
social media
platform offers the benefit of easily becoming friends with new people
worldwide, I believe this
kind of relationship does not equal interconnection in real life
to expand individual connections. For example
, a friend from social media
cannot give physical contact when we need encouragement.
To conclude
, even though social media
help
individuals connect positively, it does not equal interconnection in real Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
life
to expand individual connections. Moreover
, it also
has an adverse effect by neglecting their closest environment.Submitted by Putriaaa on
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