You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, Describe what you enjoyed about the course Say how muchcooking you've done sicne the source Suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Mr John, I am Ta Ha and I recently completed your
course
on making Japanese seafood stews. I am writing
this
letter to feedback about the
course
as per your request.
First
of all, I really enjoyed the
course
as I learned a number of new combinations to make tastier and healthier Japanese food.
Moreover
, I found that useful for my family gatherings as they enjoyed my cooking. Since I am benefited from
this
course
, I will
also
recommend it to my friends. On top of that, after I attended the
course
, I am sharing the duties with my wife to take over the kitchen in turn. Indeed, I am happy to share and cook for my family whenever I have free time. I am now well equipped with not only good recipes from the
course
but
also
new experiments on fresh seafood,
Therefore
, my family really enjoyed my new side. I am so glad to witness your professionalism and kindness during the
course
. I hope you find my frank feedback useful even though all are good things. I cannot wait to attend when your school opens the new Korean kimchi-making
course
next
month. Please do notify me. Yours sincerely, Ta Ha
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