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Many companies are developing electronic books. Some people think thoese books will replaced paper books in the future. To what extent do you agree?

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A new version of
books
 is created online and some
people
 believe that paperless
books
 will take place of physical
books
 in the coming time. I do not agree with
this
 statement completely.
First
 of all, store
books
 are easy to read without any distractions.
People
 do not need to arrange electronic devices to read these
books
 which is a huge benefit because it saves money and time.
For example
, if a reader does not have digital devices,
then
 they have to spend a lot of money to buy new products to access e-
books
.
Hence
,
people
 prefer to read shelves
books
.
Second
 of all, many manufacturers depend on publishing
books
, magazines and so on. If in-person
books
 are stopped,
then
 many sellers will have to face loss in their business.
On the contrary
, paperless journals save the waste of paper.
For example
,
people
 only can read physical
books
 2-3 times and after ,that they prefer to recycle them.
As a result
, the overloaded recycling has to manage which consumes time and money. But
on the other hand
, e-
books
 do not need to publish .
people
 can just read them and if they do not want to keep them, they can just delete them from their devices. In conclusion, in my opinion, even if it is effective to use electronic
books
 but they will not take place of paper-based
books
 permanently because these
books
 are a way of employment and are easy to read.
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