Advanced technology has brought many beneficial changes to the world. However, some old people today struggle with the use of technologies such as mobile phones and the Internet. How can the elderly benefit from using advanced technologies? How can the elderly be encouraged to use consumer electronics more often?

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In the
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century, the world has been changing very quickly due to the fast development of
internet
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and electronic gadgets.
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, part of the old generation
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being marginated in
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field. the purpose of
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essay is to bring some ideas to help the elderly
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to exploit it and how to encourage them to
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it.
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with, senior citizens are able to
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electronic devices and take benefit from
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. To explain, most old individuals can learn how to
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advanced technologies, but they just need someone to teach them
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as their child or nephew.
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they are aware of the usage, there will be plenty of
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advantages
advatanges
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advantages
.
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, old
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could utilize the mobile
phone
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to stay in contact with relatives that are living abroad.
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, if a senior has a
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daughter
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daughter
in another country, he could
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the
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to make a video call with her.
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, the internet helps
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ancient
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ancient
people
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to be more up-to-date.To be more specific, they could
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cell
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phone
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phones
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to watch
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the news
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and
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what is happening in the world;
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, it will prevent them to be marginated. Moving
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, once
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aged
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exploit the benefits
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the
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high tech, they will be automatically encouraged to
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it more often.To explain, one time they
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knew
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that it is useful to call distant relatives, they will repeat
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actions
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more often.
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, a grandmother that has a granddaughter in a distant country will
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the
phone
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frequently to call her. Another thing worth
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mentioning
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is that many companies have developed
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a phone
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phone
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phones
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that
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the
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function
fuction
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function
of enlarging the letters so it will help elderly
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to read on the
phone
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. In conclusion, even though the world is developing faster and faster,
people
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are not forgetting that there is a group of folks
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to say the aged one that
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helps
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help
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