Some people believe that educational establishments should multiply the exams which learners take, while others think this is just a waste of time and strength. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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CONTEMPORARY WORLD, SOME OF THE PEOPLE TRUST THAT EXAMS ARE THE KEY FACTOR TO ESTABLISHING THE COMPETITIVENESS IN CHILDREN BECAUSE THEY ARE GOING TO BE OUR NATION'S FUTURE STRENGTH . WHILE OTHER PEOPLE THINK THAT IT WASTE OF TIME AND

ALSO

BELIEVE THAT ONE EXAM CAN'

DECIDE THEIR DESTINATION. I WILL EXPLAIN BOTH VIEWS IN THE FOLLOWING PARAGRAPHS. WELL , THE TESTS PLAY A VITAL ROLE IN STUDENT EDUCATION LIFE AS IT DEVELOPS THE COMPETITION BETWEEN THEM WHICH RESULTS IN THE DEVELOPMENT OF THEIR KNOWLEDGE. ONE CAN ONLY MOVE FORWARD WHEN THERE IS A GOAL TO ACHIEVE. MOST OF THE STUDENTS EXPECT TO RECEIVE PRIZES AND PERFORMANCE APPRAISALS SO ASSESSMENTS CAN ABLE TO DO THAT.

FOR EXAMPLE

, IN SPORTS PLAYERS ALWAYS EAGERLY WAIT FOR THE CONTEST TO PROVE THEMSELVES.

MOREOVER

, EXAMINATIONS HELP THEM TO FULFILL THEIR DREAMS, SELF-SATISFACTION AND ABLE TO JUSTIFY THEIR TALENT.

ON THE OTHER HAND

, OVER-PRACTICALS LEADS TO STRESS AND ANXIETY WITH EXAMINERS AND

ALSO

THEY ONLY PREPARE TO GET GOOD MARKS NOT TO ENHANCE THEIR SKILLS. THE SOCIETY ALWAYS JUDGE THEM BASED ON THEIR MARKS NOT ON MERIT.

THIS

CAN LEAD TO PSYCHOLOGICAL PROBLEMS THAT KILL THEIR HOPE OF A CAREER. THESE MIDTERMS LOSE THEIR TIME AND STRENGTH IN ORDER TO GET THE BEST SCORE.

FOR INSTANCE

, MOST OF THE SUCCESSFUL PERSONS LIKE SUNDHAR PITCHAI DIDN'

GET FINE RESULTS IN THE EXAM BUT BECAME INSPIRATIONAL PEOPLE BECAUSE OF THEIR MERITS.

HENCE

, A SHEET OF PAPER CAN'

DECIDE THE FUTURE OF LEARNERS AND IT REDUCE THEIR ENERGY. TO SUM IT UP, TESTS OF KNOWLEDGE MAY CREATE MENTAL ILLNESS , LOSS OF CONFIDENCE AND COULDN'

ABLE TO SHOW THEIR CAPABILITY TO THE COMMUNITY.

ALSO

, QUIZ HAVE THEIR MERITS WHICH INCREASE THE DESIRE TO BE MORE SUCCESSFUL AND IT HELPS TO THE COUNTRY'S DEVELOPMENT. IN MY OPINION, PAPERS CAN'

DETERMINE ONE'S ACCOMPLISHMENTS SO IMPLEMENTING THE FINALS SHOULD BE WITHIN A LIMITED.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

314 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Some people believe that educational establishments should multiply the exams which learners take, while others think this is just a waste of time and strength. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Include an introduction and conclusion

In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to slove them?

In some countries university students live away from home and in another cities wile study. Do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages of living in another cities?

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students do not respect their teachers as much as they did in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?