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Public concern has arisen about whether it's a good thing that we know a lot about different countries and how people live there. International travel and mass media spreading fastly and easily have contributed a lot to that knowledge.

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Convincing arguments can be made that learning about lives in other
countries
 can prevent
people
 from miscommunications that might lead to wars. Having an insight into what is happening in another country can prevent
people
 from judging some questionable actions or statements too quickly. Knowing about what is happening outside of your own nation can make you helpful to those in need.
People
 who are born in more privileged
countries
 can spread the word about what is happening to those who are less fortunate.
This
 way
people
 can receive
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 help and support that they might not get from their own government.
Also
, having an insight into
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foreign
countries
 makes
people
 learn about other cultures. It's a great opportunity to share and learn, find inspiration, help others and receive
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 help yourself.
However
, knowledge about foreign
countries
' lives can make
people
 judge others. In the world there are many different cultures and
people
 are used to their own. Some individuals sometimes believe that their way of living is superior and the only reasonable one.
This
 mindset can cause a lot of damage to many smaller and weaker religions, tribes and cultures. Knowing a lot about how other
people
 live in their home nations gives a lot of room to judge. I believe that the opportunity to know how
people
 live outside of my own nation is an amazing thing that helps us understand, help, and prevent disasters. Though with that knowledge comes the responsibility to be respectful and not intrusive.
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