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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or workin a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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There are several key
reasons
 for learning a foreign tongue. Not only for travel or work but
also
knowledge
 of different languages, help for several
reasons
such
 as studies, each person's desires and for investigators. There is a
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 among
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beleive
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believe
 it
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 only for two
reasons
 while others
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believe
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believe
 there are several benefits. Personally, I
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believe
people
 learn other tounges for different causes. The ensure paragraphs of
this
 essay will discuss
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both sides of
this
 matter. When migrating to
the
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other countries for travelling or work, the
language
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 a major barrier.
Firstly
, communication issue is the
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fundamental
fundemental
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fundamental
 key factor. When
people
 know only their mother
tongu
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tongue
, they can not
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sharing
 ideas with other nations.
This
 result, they can
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 for
miisguides
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misguided
misguides
.
For example
, in a new
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country
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c
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country
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ountry
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 most
of
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people
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the people
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 do not know about
road
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 and places,
when
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 they can not understand guides or
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spoken
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 patterns , they may be
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 for robberies.
Secondly
,
knowledge
 of academic
language
require
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requires
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 when
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transferring
transfering
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transferring
 for foreign vacancies.
For instance
, there are require some
language
 tests
such
 as IELTS, PTE and TOFEL for some
europian
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European
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 countries
such
 as Canada, England,
USA
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the USA
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, Australia and
Newzeland
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New Zealand
. Travelling and professions
not
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are not
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 only
reasons
 to study other's native
toungues
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tongues
tongue
.
First
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 one is, some
people
 desire to investigate
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the history
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, culture and
tradition
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traditions
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 of other nations. When they
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investigate
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,
knowledge
 of
language
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the language
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 , be become more convenient
their
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 work. As an example, a lot of books over the world have
written
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 in English and there are contain more
and
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accurate details.
Second
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 one is study purposes, students are migrating to foreign universities for their higher education.
For example
,
Oxferd
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Oxford
 university and
university
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the university
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 of
Sunderlandhave
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Sunderland have
 been giving
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scholarships
scholorships
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scholarships
 for foreign students. In conclusion, when migrating to
country
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the country
a country
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 for a profession or travelling,
knowledge
 of
foreign
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a foreign
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 tongue
essential
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is essential
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.
However
, learning
of
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other languages
cause
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causes
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for
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several things
such
 as study and
person's
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a person's
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 desire.
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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