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some people believe that mordern technology encourages more social behaviour, others believe it has made people less socialable. give views and opinion

#people #mordern #technology #behaviour #socialable
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he is no doubt that
technology
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 is giving new ways for
people
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 to keep in touch with their friends and family by using the Internet.
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 phenomenon is offering manifold benefits to
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, while it
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 brings some disadvantages,
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 as being less social with others. The following paragraphs will analyze both views and give my opinion. On the one hand, the various social media applications,
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, Facebook and Facetime, are those apps which provide functions that give community online chats and online interviews.
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 many international students leaving own country to study, he or they still can use related websites or applications to in touch with other communities whom they would love to despite they do not stay in the same nation. It is clear that anyone won't be limited by time or space, it can easier communicate with others.
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, on the negative side,
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 can pose a threat to the public's social skills,
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, communication and interpersonal skills. The main reason is they do not understand how they do during the conversation. It would cause
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 to give up interacting with each other in real life.
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, it can lead to con-social behaviours in the real world. Another fact can be seen in the public prefers using electronic products to contact business clients or relatives rather than using the face-to-face method because it is not only more convenient to connect, but
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 does not waste time. In conclusion, the changes in
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 are necessary for society, it improves the quality of our life. The most important is
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 should know the pros and cons when they use new
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, and remember that new
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 just decreases the inconvenience issues in our life, it does not represent can solve all of the problems we meet.
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