Some people feel that fashion is like art and a significant part of society, while others feel that fashion is a waste of time and money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Fashion

has existed, since the start of human civilization. The awareness of

fashion

trends

is prominent in recent decades compared to ancient history.

Fashion

can include clothing, accessories, daily activities and the lifestyle of an individual. In my opinion,

fashion

has high negative impacts on our society compared to positive gains. Many people think that

fashion

boosts our confidence and morale within ourselves and

peers

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. When we dress and present ourselves as per the latest

trends

we might attract new friends and we will be outstanding, so that we feel positive vibes and energy.

For instance

, a person poorly

dresses

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dressed

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in an interview can be compared with a person who follows interview dressing standards.

However

, dressing beyond the interview standard can

also

cause unnecessary attraction.

On the other hand

,

Fashion

in recent decades

causes

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environmental hazards. People use more accessories like beauty products and leather

items

, which may lead to high consumption of animal leather and chemical substances like silica, mica and sulphate.

For example

, high usage of mica or silica can cause skin cancer,

thus

leading to high cancer

rate

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rates

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in recent decades.

Due to

leather products, many animals

has

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have

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been slaughtered which results in

endanger

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the endangerment

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of a species.

Furthermore

,

Advance

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advanced fashion

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Fashion

trends

can

also

results

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result

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in loss of money.

Report

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The report

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says that if a person indulges themselves more on the latest

fashion

trends

, they tend to lose more money than they earn.

For example

, In a year, there are countless new make-up

items

constantly

been

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being

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developed and the costs of these

items

are surely high, if we buy most of the new

items

,

then

we are about to lose our savings.

Therefore

, to summarize, there are many

fashion

trends

that are being followed in our society,

we

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and we

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can't implement each and every

trends

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trend

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in our life. We don't need to spend separate time

for

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on

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fashion

. We can follow our own ideas to highlight ourselves among our peers.