Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others says that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Recently, there have been mutual relationships and growths between living things existing within the ecosystem.
Besides
, there has been a noticeable deterioration in the lifespan of floras and faunas
as a result
of the unbalanced nature of the surroundings. Without a doubt,
this
extinction could be highlighted as the major challenge faced within the environment, there are some other pull factors terrifying the favourable environment.
Furthermore
,
this
essay will analyze the impact of human activities as well as environmental disasters to clarify
this
.
To begin
with, there has been a drastic change in the lifecycle of organisms owing to the quest for man to meet his basic need which includes food, and shelter.
For instance
, in order to provide a comfortable building for living, there would be a need to fall down trees require for the construction of the structure.
This
results in the destruction of plants as well as animals’ habitation, due to the fact that it is not all beasts that are home-trained man found it hard to cage them.
Thus
, it is evident that over time many species of vegetation and mammals feed on themselves, thereby, they cease to live.
In addition
, the menace of flooding and drought across the globe is now becoming severe.
In particular
, many lives have been lost based on the account of the collapse of structures situated along the coastal regions
as a result
of the poor drainage systems, landscaping, and the rise in sea level.
This
remains an issue of sustainability. In summary, it is vivid that there are other pull factors that influence the loss of life within the environment which I believe the government should be addressed to sustain a balance natural cycle.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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