In theie advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

There has been a profound tendency for unusual exaggeration in
companies
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representing the same goods as
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brand new ones
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.
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controversy
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controversy
, with
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being expressed over the consequences. I am
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utterly
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entirely
convinced that
this
trend both
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their branding and
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their turnover
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jeopardy due in part to their relentless greed which will elaborate in the following paragraphs. The
first
reason is rooted in
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and unprecedented
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between rival
companies
in which each of
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to prove
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superiority.
That is
to say, they reckon that their value would disappear if they stopped
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introducing
a new product even if it
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playing
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manipulation games. The main purpose of
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scenario, which draws attention, presumably can twist reality. Mobile corporations,
for instance
, on annual basis present new devices with minor modifications as brand new ones. Having witnessed over the years, the customers seem to be less loyal to these products.
Thus
,
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reason clearly
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how
this
action in compliance with time could ruin the company's reputation.
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, hardly could anyone
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how these Greedy gestures make people reluctant to trust new tools,
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the same
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, putting
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the verge of bankruptcy.
In other words
,
although
most of them could reap the benefit of introducing any goods, considering automobiles as an example where they
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failed
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failed
to meet people's needs
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false advertising, their revenue drastically dropped after a new spark of crisis appeared. Perhaps, if they had known what would they confronting with, they never would have chosen
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method
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ample money as
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propaganda
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to
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make old products looks new.
This
procedure has been lucrative for the past decade;
however
, it would not
last
long in the future.
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paragraph vividly
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the
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detrimental effects on the company's Revenue. In conclusion,
companies
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minor adjustments. The reason
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from their hunger for straightforward wealth and the ramifications would culminate with an adverse reputation and losing their fortune.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Competition
  • Consumer demand
  • Novelty
  • Innovation
  • Progress
  • Differentiation
  • Attract
  • Generate
  • Interest
  • Positive aspect
  • Negative aspect
  • Emphasize
  • Balancing
  • Quality
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