Some people say that schools should concentrate on teaching students academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Other people say that subjects such as music and sports are also necessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many people believe that to have a bright future, schools should create conditions for
students
to focus on academic subjects
. Some individuals believe that not only important educational subjects
but also
artistically gifted subjects
need to be studied. In my opinion, I partially agree with the need to study all subjects
.
To begin
with, students
should study more academic subjects
because they offer many benefits. Active practice in this
subject will give students
many good choices. For example
, having a good education will be a great opportunity for students
who want to enter top universities in the country and abroad. Because once students
join good schools, they will acquire a lot of knowledge that will help students
to work in big companies or well-pay jobs. In addition
, students
who do well in academic subjects
will often be given priority over the rest. For example
, during the selection process, admissions officers will consider students
who are able to create value by looking at technical expertise and the ability to communicate with people. However
, to enter top universities, not only theoretical subjects
but also
artistic aptitude is an important criterion.
On the other hand
, possessing skills
in music, fine arts or physical education also
contributes to many benefits for many students
. They help develop students
' abilities and skills
. For instance
, to be able to study in foreign schools, admissions officers want to see students
with abilities such
as leading clubs or activities and the ability to communicate in front of a crowd. That's exactly what admissions officers want and certainly possessing these skills
will bring you more opportunities and jobs than just focusing on theoretical subjects
. Moreover
, accumulating experience and knowledge from gifted subjects
will help you connect well with everyone around you, creating conditions to develop those skills
well.
In conclusion, to have a bright future, students
need to try and balance both academics and artistic subjects
. As a result
, students
can make good use of their abilities to create many opportunities for themselves.Submitted by vuanhhibstrading on
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