Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What are the main effects of this epidemic?

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last

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decades

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many

people

's weight sharply increases. Our

enhance

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method for

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agriculture

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agriculture

and livestock has a serious source

for

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foods

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and so many

people

eat

to

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much. Some

people

say that

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situation is

exaggerated’

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.

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,

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unhealthy

unhealty

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unhealthy

eating habits

is

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a serious problem for

mainly

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reasons.

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reason is that,

people

jobs

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days so many

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people

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workours

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workouts

workers

are so long

thats

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that's

that

why plenty of human choose fast food which is

very

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bad meal

chose

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. Because it

contain

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furthermore

this

kind of food

tranports

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transports

transport

always has a problem

such

as contamination. Humans who chose

this

junk food

they

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generally caught obesity which is

terrible

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disease.It

cause

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cardiac problems,

diabet

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diabetes

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issue and weak muscle problem.

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reason ,

our

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advanced

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technology

technologyl

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technology

.

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time

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our world is much easier.

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example

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we have

car

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safe

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house.

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reasons make

more

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lazier. A number of

people

do not want

running

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or

walking

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they just pick up their cars.

Therefore

their

colories

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calories

do not vanish and they gain weight.

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reason is that psychology troubles. Fat

people

sometimes do not accept in their society. Some

of

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unmercifully

unmercifulles

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people

make laughing and

yelling

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thats

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that

that's

cause depression.

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scientific reports show us that, numerous obes person do not go outside owing to

this

kind

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of problems All things considered overweight

cause

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serious mental and

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physical

physcial

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physical

problems. İndividuals be aware of

this

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troubles and

government

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ought to support obes

ones

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