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In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?

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There is
such
 a significant problem in our world that the majority of
people
 are forgetting about their ancient culture and traditional festivals.
Therefore
, they are not arranged anymore.
First
 of all,
this
 is happening because
people
 work hard and they do not have enough time to think and remember about traditions of celebrations how they used to be. They started forgetting most of them day by day due to
they
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 need to take care of their family and come up with plans for the future.
Nevertheless
, work and education are crucial parts of our lives that we should remember and celebrate old holidays.
This
 is a way to show our pride and to be together at least on those days. The
second
 reason is the modern world of gadgets. Some
people
 agree that we do not have to celebrate our antique festivals which became
old-fashioned
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 time ago. It is tedious for the new generation, which spares its time only on the internet.
Therefore
, humanity is trying to make up new ones.
Nonetheless
, there are numerous
people
 who would like to return it back and enjoy
this
moment
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celebration
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. To recapitulate, humanity should remember its cultural festivals and traditions due to the fact that
this
 is our future and we do not have to lose it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traditional festivals
  • heritage
  • cultural identity
  • folklore
  • cultural tourism
  • intergenerational
  • homogenization
  • commercialization
  • intangible cultural heritage
  • community engagement
  • awareness
  • revitalize
  • cultural diversity
  • educational programs
  • governmental support
  • logistical support
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