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Layout of a university sports centre and its redevelopment

#layout #university #sports #centre #redevelopment
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The two maps illustrate the current and future development of the
University
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Sports
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Centre
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. Overall, What stands out from the maps is that in future the
university
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sports
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centre
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 will be completely redesigned and turned into a modern
sports
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 facility for students. Looking into the details, At present, the
university
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sports
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centre
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 has a main building in the middle and one outdoor court on both sides. In the main building after the reception, there is a 25m
pool
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 in the middle. There is a changing
room
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 on the left
side
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 of the
pool
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 and a seating area on the right
side
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 of the
pool
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 while there is a gym after the
pool
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. In future plans, two outdoor courts will be included in the building and the whole area will be covered as one building. Once you entered the building there will be a reception at your front. After the reception, there will be the same size
pool
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 as before. On the left
side
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 of the
pool
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, there will be a changing
room
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 and on the right
side
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 of the
pool
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, there will be a seating area. There will be no change in the sizes of these areas. A whole new set of buildings will be added on the east
side
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 of the
centre
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. There will be a cafe, a changing
room
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 and 2 new dance studios. A new
sports
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 hall will be constructed at the
centre
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. In the northwest corner of the building, there will be a leisure
pool
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 along with the changing
room
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. Just outside the changing
room
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, there will be a
sports
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 shop. All new and amazing sets of buildings will be constructed in the areas that are incorporated newly into the
university
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sports
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centre
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.
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