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Summary of road access to city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

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The two maps illustrate the
road
 infrastructure around the
city
 hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Overall, What stands out from the map is that the
road
 access to the
city
 hospital is developed and turned more user-friendly in 2010 than it was in 2007. Looking into the details, In 2007 the
city
 hospital did not have separate car parking for the public and staff. There were bus stops on both sides of the hospital
road
 and the parking area was on the right side at the back of the bus stops. In 2010, a new parking area is constructed for the public in the east of the
city
 hospital. Two roundabouts are added to divert the flow of traffic smoothly. One is constructed on the main
road
 and another one is constructed in front of the
city
 hospital. On the left side of the hospital
road
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 a new bus station was constructed and on the right side, the whole space is allotted to staff for car parking. A 3rd roundabout is
also
 made on the southeast corner of the
city
 hospital.
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