Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

It is argued that certain parts of tactics in advertising have negative effects on the population, violate moral principles and are hard to
be accepted
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in the contemporary world. In my opinion, I completely agree with
this
statement. In
this
essay, I will explain my viewpoints in detail in the ensuing paragraphs. First of all, the reason is that advertising manipulates people, which aims to persuade people that buying products will make them happier, especially a luxury brand.
For example
, some advertisers focus on selling a brand image and increasing the consumer's desire by using glamorous and successful celebrities to promote their goods.
Furthermore
, we are persuaded to follow the latest trend. 'Buying certain the newest brand is associated with a higher status' is another relevant example of
this
aspect in the consumer culture.
Therefore
,
this
distorted value of money should be regulated since it is unacceptable.
Besides
the aforementioned, advertisers aim their marketing at offspring, including unhealthy foods and bad habits.
This
purpose is that children are easily influenced by advertisements,
also
they can put pressure on their parents to buy them things.
However
, some products may be a risk to their health,
such
as taking cigarettes or eating junk food. After all, in some countries, it is legal to advertise cigarettes on television.
As a result
, advertising aimed at kids should be controlled because of somehow unethical. In conclusion, I believe some advertisements use unfair means to get better business, including persuading people to buy expensive brands or marketing in a way that attracts children to buy unhealthy stuff.
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Ensure that the introduction clearly outlines the main points that will be discussed in the essay.
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Provide a more balanced discussion by acknowledging counterarguments and offering a broader view of the topic.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unethical
  • Unacceptable
  • Deceptive
  • Exaggerated
  • Misleading
  • Manipulation
  • Vulnerable
  • Targeted advertising
  • Perpetuation
  • Societal norms
  • Stereotypes
  • Negative body image
  • Intrusion of privacy
  • Data-driven
  • Over-saturation
  • Desensitization
  • Annoyance
  • Greenwashing
  • Eco-conscious
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