Write about the following topic: A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress. What should people do to stay healthy in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.
There is a famous saying that "
Health
is wealth". People
should focus on maintaining their health
rather than working vigorously to earn money. People
in modern
lifestyle face a lot of pressure from work. Many of them Correct article usage
the modern
depends
on physical activities and diets to release their stress. Change the verb form
depend
This
essay discusses various methods of being healthy.
Firstly
, India is the place where the
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apply
Yoga
is
originated. Rulers, warriors and pandits in Unnecessary verb
apply
ancient
period Correct article usage
the ancient
use
to do Change the form of the verb
used
yoga
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in order
inorder
to increase Correct your spelling
in order
the
concentration and for positive thoughts. Correct article usage
apply
Yoga
is a
ideal tool for stress release and many professionals are Change the article
an
practicing
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practising
yoga
nowadays and also
Yoga
has received wide
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a wide
rage
of acceptance from all over the world. Correct your spelling
range
For
example
the CEO of Virgin airways revealed that his daily Add a comma
,example
yoga
practice help me
to release Correct pronoun usage
him
the
work stress and Correct article usage
apply
also
to maintain positive
attitude. Add an article
a positive
Likewise
another activity which Add a comma
,Likewise
people
can do is zumba
. Change the capitalization
Zumba
This
is Ideal for the
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people
who love to dance with
music and Change preposition
to
zumba
can be practised even inside a room.
Change the capitalization
Zumba
Secondly
, many people
follows
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follow
diet
as well which is very important to stay healthy. Many Correct article usage
a diet
people
in my country follows
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follow
strict
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a strict
diet
. It advisable
to make a Add a missing verb
is advisable
diet
plan according to the
age and Correct article usage
apply
health
condition and this
can be prepared with the help of a professional dietitian. On the other hand
, habits such
as smoking and pan masala can affect the
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health
adversely. For instance
, studies has
proven that Change the verb form
have
people
who consume pan masala have high
chance of mouth cancer.
To summarise, there are many ways to stay healthy and Add an article
a high
people
can select various activities according to their preferences, however
for a
Ideal lifestyle both physical activity and Change the article
an
healthy
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a healthy
diet
is
important.Correct subject-verb agreement
are
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