A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress. What should people do to stay healthy in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.
There is a famous saying that "
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People
should focus on maintaining their Use synonyms
health
rather than working vigorously to earn money. Use synonyms
People
in Use synonyms
modern
lifestyle face a lot of pressure from work. Many of them Correct article usage
the modern
depends
on physical activities and diets to release their stress. Change the verb form
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This
essay discusses various methods of being healthy.
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wide
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a wide
rage
of acceptance from all over the world. Correct your spelling
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people
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diet
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a diet
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a strict
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diet
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health
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health
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people
who consume pan masala have Use synonyms
high
chance of mouth cancer.
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people
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