Some say that news has no connection with most people’s lives and it is a waste of time for most of us to read newspapers and watch television news programs. Do you agree or disagree?

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opine that
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does not have any association with the
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of individuals and investing tile towards getting insights about various current affairs either through print or mass media is a
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waste of time.
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notion because
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helps in creating awareness and
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aids in taking
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promptly. It is an irrefutable fact that
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there are a plethora of events happening across the globe which might have an impact on the
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of contemporary
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, and it is essential to know about these events through newspapers or
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channels. So, that members of society can stay aware and alert. To illustrate ,
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about the recession in
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certainly may not be important
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for the public in India.
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, a recession in foreign land definitely impacts the home country's economy directly or indirectly.
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programs and papers are crucial to circulate knowledge and wisdom.if t
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,
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from all walks of
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lives
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can take intelligent
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with the help and support of
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circulating platforms. Different
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in various domains
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as business owners, students,salaried employees , housewives and even government officials can take
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decisions
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in their own area of work if they are updated and have knowledge about affairs happening all over the world with the help of
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.
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, during COVID-19 righteous
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were taken to protect the masses from the pandemic
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was only possible due to
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platforms.
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, decision-making turns out to be effective and efficient due to the variety of
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sources. No doubt, due to cut-throat competition in
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industry ,numerous illogical and irrelevant
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creates chaos in society,
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can not oversee the advantages that
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channels and newspapers
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into the
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of common man and women. To conclude,
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news
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certainly has a strong connection with
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’s
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as
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provides various information and
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supports individuals to make mindful
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