In some countries, more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question?

In recent years,
people
around the world have become learning and interested in the building or houses where
people
lived in the past. There are various reasons to be interested in past circumstances. In the following paragraph, these reasons will be discussed in detail. Nowadays, our countries have many facilities to provide and have more buildings than before. Some
people
might wonder and start questions about the environment of
people
in those eras which leads to an interest in history. There were abundant purposes to learning,
for example
, someone might watch movies that reminded them of the past in their countries or someone might be fond of agriculture as the old building.
However
, how can they reach these questions?
Although
it seems hard to discover their interests because it's long gone, it was possible. Our world has much research about
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history and it is easier to learn on the internet.
Moreover
, some countries that have
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aged building has tourist attraction in each country to convey not only story about past era environment but
also
provide information and knowledge to someone who is interested. In fact, they can discover their question about the history of the house and building from pictures in the past,
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maybe they can ask their parents when they were young for more surprising pieces of information as well. There is much research to provide their curiosity. The above research can achieve their curiosity, though it was nothing to prove.
Therefore
,
people
should have various sources of information to answer
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interesting questions as well.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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