The gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider; the rich are becoming richer, and the poor are getting even poorer. What problems can the situation cause? What can be done to reduce this gap?
Nowadays, the
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This problems
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There are some reasons why the gap between rich and poor nations is up. Change the determiner
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the poor
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have enough
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the education
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knowledge
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Japan
have
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it
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country
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the Japanese
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technology
technologic
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To sum up, the cause of Correct your spelling
technology
this
gap is natural
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a natural
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disasters
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knowledge
knoweledge
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knowledge
this
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