Some say that news has no connection with most people’s lives and it is a waste of time for most of us to read newspapers and watch television news programs. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays,

people

have connected to each other because of many things, one of them

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the

news

. Some

people

claim that

news

is not essential because it is not connected with

people

's lives.

Furthermore

, reading newspapers or watching television

for

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the

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news

could waste our time. I totally disagree with

this

statement because

news

provides much

information

and could clarify false

information

First

of all, the

news

gives us a lot of useful

information

which could broaden

people

's insight.

Information

provided by

news

could give and improve

people

's knowledge and perspective.

Therefore

people

should try to read or watch the

news

every day, especially before doing their activities.

For example

news

about a riot in Kanjuruhan Stadium in Malang. Many TV stations share

this

with their audiences to show what actually happened in there.

As a result

people

around the world have the same perspective about the actual situation.

Moreover

news

in the newspaper or TV

also

could clarify the fake

news

found on the internet. The

news

released or broadcasted by trusted

news

agencies has passed some phases, including supervision by the editor.

For instance

, the case of the presidential elections in Indonesia in 2014. There was a lot of

information

about cheating conducted by one of the candidates on Twitter.

However

this

information

was fake and was clarified by a trusted

news agent

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. In conclusion, the

news

shared with us through newspapers or TV is vital. It can improve our knowledge and it can clarify false

news

made by irresponsible

people

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