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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artficially intelligent robots. do you agree or disagree

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Humans will lack job opportunities taken over by artificially intelligent
robots
 in the coming age. while heavy computation tasks shall be done by machines,
jobs
 which require personal Interaction will still require us to handle them.
This
 essay will discuss why most of the
jobs
 in future will be carried out by artificially intelligent
robots
.
Jobs
 with longer working hours and heavy calculations will be assigned to artificially intelligent
robots
 as many firms will require precise data invoices and accurate predictions,
also
 it will be cheaper than hiring and training a human to do so. Many big technology companies
such
 as amazon have already established smart superstores which automatically bill your items from your amazon wallet with no human interaction. For these reasons , humans will likely be replaced by
robots
 at
jobs
 in which they are more efficient.
Conversely
,
Jobs
 that need human assistance specifically will not be done by
robots
.
Jobs
such
 as counselling, teaching and coaching require a very in-depth connection with the other individual as every human has a different mindset. Many social media platforms
such
 as Facebook, and Instagram have tried to improve our application experience with the help of artificial intelligence, but they still require human experience as input to do so.
This
 is why I feel
robots
 will not replace humans in all
jobs
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • artificial intelligence (AI)
  • automation
  • robotics
  • futuristic developments
  • analyze data
  • analytical precision
  • human capabilities
  • emotional intelligence
  • human interaction
  • human oversight
  • strategic decision-making
  • nuances of human judgment
  • technological landscape
  • intrinsic human qualities
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