Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree about this opinion?

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has become a frequent subject of debate with strong arguments for and against. Personally, I believe that humans are paying too much attention and allocating too many resources to

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issue, as will now be explained.

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, if we allow any species to disappear,

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is actually not a disaster. Some people may argue that

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biology will be seriously affected if birds and wild

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are on the verge of extinction, but

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is an exaggeration. Fossil evidence suggests that the mass disappearance of the dinosaur did not cause any harm to other species on the Earth but merely triggered the emergence of others

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as the mammal.

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, we should not devote too much attention to the protection of

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.

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, public money is limited.

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means that the national budget should be allocated to more urgent issues rather than expending too much

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the conservation of wild

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and birds.

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, more resources should be diverted to medical research to find

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remedies for fatal diseases

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as HIV and cancer, which may help to save thousands of lives in society.

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, the government can simply protect

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by continuing campaigns to raise public awareness of the protection of

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habitats

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or impose stricter punishments on activities that may harm wild

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. Any individual who hunts

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for food or for pleasure should be given a heavy fine, and

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may discourage them from threatening the

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of wild

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. In conclusion,

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I do not refute the argument for the conservation of

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, I believe that it should attract less attention and fewer resources from the public.