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The diagram illustrates the trends in the consumption of three different fast food options by Australian
teenagers
 during the
period
 1975 and 2000. Overall, while hamburgers gained popularity between 1975 and 2000, fish and chips witnessed the opposite trend.
Additionally
, pizza grew to become one of the most preferred fast food options for
teenagers
 in Australia in 2000. In the
first
 half of the
period
, while both pizza and hamburgers were gaining popularity in the
period
 in question, chips and fish were preferred by most
teenagers
 in Australia. That being said, it started to lose its acceptance among them after 1985, declining sharply since. In the
second
 half of the
period
, hamburgers were the most preferred fast food option for many
teenagers
 living in Australia before
it
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 levelled off in 1985, consumed 100 times
in
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a year.
In addition
 to that, Pizza rose to fame rapidly before it finished in 1995, consumed 80 times in a year.
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