Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discussion both sides and give your opinion

Few citizens opine that ecological concerns have to be clarified globally

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others argue that it can be rectified

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the country itself. I believe that both are essential for

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sustainable development so I will be exhibiting my idea in the upcoming paragraphs.

To begin

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certainly it is important to conduct a global committee to make sure

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is protected. Because only with the involvement of

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Nations the remaining countries will take the

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seriously. Global warming is a great threat across the globe only through addressing

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nationally it might not be solved

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a new set of rules for

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better future.

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, after the industrial revolution child labour was abolished only because the entire Globe united across the table which significantly reduced to a greater

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. Since the problem is affecting the whole globe it is important to have global discussions for

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adequate solution.

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implementing the idea which is developed globally should be

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. Because it is

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ministers

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duty to involve the citizens unite together to fight the battle against the sustainable development authorities to visualise the situation and

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provide adequate solutions. For

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instance, In India

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was passed several years ago

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is to make sure agricultural area is utilised for farming. Development is necessary

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, it should not

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society.

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in these kind

or

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reforms to protect

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nature because it is the right of each and every one to live

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planet

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for that steps has to be taken internationally

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nationally