The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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information about the figure of the household electrical
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and how long per family did housework from 1920 to 2019. On the first
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, there are three lines which represent the changes
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percentage
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the percentage
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of washing machines,
refrigerators
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and vacuum cleaners. It was the
refrigerators
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that changed most in the
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period
, which was almost none in 1920 and became something people
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couldn't
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a house in 1980.
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After
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stablised
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stabilised
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. Like
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, the portage of vacuum cleaners grew up since the figure at 30% in 1920 and reached
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peak
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100% in 2000, which lasted until 2019. Different from the two households,the percentage of washing machines increased with
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future
. It took 40% in1920 and raised to 70 in 1960.
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it went down since 1960, which altered to go up in1980 and exceeded 70 after 2000. The second
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shows the
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changes
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the number of time spend on housework in a week
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family. It is striking that the
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feature
jumped between 1920 and 1960 when the figure
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household electrical
furnitures
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furniture
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soared. It continued to decrease
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a low speed after 1960.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words refrigerators with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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