Some people argue that companies and private individuals, rather than governments, should pay to clean up the pollution that they produced. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Pollution

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is a harmful factor to human health and the environment. In

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respect, it is perceived by some individuals that

manufacturers

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and

companies

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,

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of the authorities, should pay to clean up their

contamination

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, and I almost agree with

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idea. There are some advantages if

manufacturers

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clean their

pollution

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.

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, people can be provided more welfare services by the government because cleaning

contamination

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by private individuals may reduce the expenditure,

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the wage of

workers

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, states should pay for

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issue .

as a result

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, the government can invest in many other services

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of purifying

pollution

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.

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, the rate of

pollution

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may diminish.

manufacturers

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should spend money to clean their

pollution

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because they may need to employ

workers

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for

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issue, and they should pay the wage of these

workers

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.

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, if they want their

companies

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to be profitable they should reduce the amount of

pollution

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in order to decrease the number of

workers

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that they should pay.

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, cleaning

contamination

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by

manufacturers

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may increase social services and reduce

pollution

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.

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, Some people believe that if

companies

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clean up their

pollution

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, it may have a negative effect. They argue that cleaning by

companies

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may increase the rate of inflation because they have to spend part of their financial resources on cleaning up the

pollution

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, so may increase the price of their products in order to offset their loss of money.

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, it can have a negative impact in terms of economic view. In conclusion, If

manufacturers

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and

companies

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purify their

contamination

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may have more positive effects .

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, I almost agree with the idea that they should clean their

pollution

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.