You went to another city for a training course and stayed at a friend’s house for a week. They have been great hosts. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, thank them for having you at their house for a week express your gratitude for their hospitality say how much you miss them

Dear Raman, I am writing
this
letter to let you know that I reached home
last
week
and ever since
then
I wanted to write to you and say thank you for allowing me to stay at your place for one
week
. I was very delighted and felt honoured by the way your family treated me during that time. Your parents took care of me, as I was their son too and I still remember your father helping me in understanding a few important topics of my
course work
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. Your brother Mahesh was
also
a helping hand too , he was my rider for one whole
week
and he always gave me the regard and respect that he gives to you being a younger brother.
Last
but not the least, you my friend helped me in enrolling
to
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on
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this
course that would give me an opportunity to achieve my future aspirations.
Its
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been a
week
that
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since
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I left you people but
still
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I miss each and every one of you and I really wanted to be with you guys again
and
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for
this
to happen I am inviting your family to my
sisters
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sister's
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marriage,which is taking place
next
month. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours lovingly,
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