You went to another city for a training course and stayed at a friend’s house for a week. They have been great hosts. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, thank them for having you at their house for a week express your gratitude for their hospitality say how much you miss them

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Dear Raman, I am writing

this

letter to let you know that I reached home

last

week

and ever since

then

I wanted to write to you and say thank you for allowing me to stay at your place for one

week

. I was very delighted and felt honoured by the way your family treated me during that time. Your parents took care of me, as I was their son too and I still remember your father helping me in understanding a few important topics of my

course work

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. Your brother Mahesh was

also

a helping hand too , he was my rider for one whole

week

and he always gave me the regard and respect that he gives to you being a younger brother.

Last

but not the least, you my friend helped me in enrolling

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this

course that would give me an opportunity to achieve my future aspirations.

Its

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It's

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been a

week

that

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since

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I left you people but

still

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I miss each and every one of you and I really wanted to be with you guys again

and

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apply

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for

this

to happen I am inviting your family to my

sisters

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sister's

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marriage,which is taking place

month. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours lovingly,

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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209 words

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You went to another city for a training course and stayed at a friend’s house for a week. They have been great hosts. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, thank them for having you at their house for a week express your gratitude for their hospitality say how much you miss them

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.