Nowadays young people mostly learn by reading books or watching movies and TV shows ,rather than personal experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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present-day teenagers are more likely to study knowledge through books and moves. I completely disagree with

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due to the revolution of employment and the need for a

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wage.

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revolution caused by the rapid development of the world’s economy is one of the major reasons, which has been leading to the transfer of the new generation

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force. Indeed, most of company and

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various fields is employing

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with the requirement of strong practical experience not only for the most immediate productive effect

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but

also

for the protection of exorbitant

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facilities

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and infrastructure. Convincingly, many universities and colleges now

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traditional theory lessons mixed up with practical courses and

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modern

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convenient

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, a survey conducted in 2018 in Vietnam shows that 67% of employee possesses at least two years of real experience

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different positions in plenty of working environments.

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century desire a good salary cause hardly they can accept a limited income which is inconsistent with the valuable time and, costly tertiary fees that they have to pay

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is an understandable demand due to the fact that after completing

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education degree,

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of a family have to wrestle to afford

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the student's loons.

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influence

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the economical development of a specific nation. To recapitulate, I do agree of at students

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are internalizing more practical skills

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work thanks to the change

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working requirements and the high salary.