Many people today, especially in the developed world, are choosing to have fewer children, or none at all. Why is this happening, and do you think it is a good trend? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the contemporary
world
, many people
spend a busy lifestyle and majority of the people
are choosing to give birth to fewer children
and some don't. In my point of ,view this
is a negative outcome to
the family background as well as Change preposition
for
the
society, Correct article usage
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,
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however
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,however
this
will have greater consequences for the world
population, as it is decreasing.
To commence with, in the ancient era, our ancestors had children
more than a dozen in a family but, due to the development in the world
, such
as the introduction of new technological facts, people
are running towards money. On the contrary
, most married couples don’t want to have children
, because they can’t even look after themselves and if a third
party joins the family they are going to end up in poverty. As an example, one of my friends is a multi-millionaire and she only has an only child, because she doesn’t want to spend half of her living expenses on another child. This
make
sense that today's young generation Change the verb form
makes
choose
to be single.
Another factor for decreasing population in a country is that the Correct subject-verb agreement
chooses
world
's leading pharmaceutical companies have introduced child protection ways, that limit the growth of the
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children
in a
women. Especially the younger generation is towards these methods, while they get their satisfaction and they control the birth, Correct the article-noun agreement
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,
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however
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,however
this
is a new trend among the people
. As a result
of these addictions, women and men get side effects, as their pregnancy rate reduces. As a consequence of these factors
the ability to produce new lives for the Add a comma
,factors
world
is extinct.
To sum up, this
trend should not be continued by young couples and the world
and families face obvious consequences in the future. It's we who should look after our future by giving birth to new generations,
so that the Remove the comma
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world
will develop.Submitted by wathsala.lekamge1997 on
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