Many people today, especially in the developed world, are choosing to have fewer children, or none at all. Why is this happening, and do you think it is a good trend? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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, many

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spend a busy lifestyle and majority of the

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are choosing to give birth to fewer

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and some don't. In my point of ,view

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is a negative outcome

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the family background as well as

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will have greater consequences for the

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population, as it is decreasing. To commence with, in the ancient era, our ancestors had

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more than a dozen in a family but, due to the development in the

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as the introduction of new technological facts,

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are running towards money.

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, most married couples don’t want to have

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, because they can’t even look after themselves and if a

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party joins the family they are going to end up in poverty. As an example, one of my friends is a multi-millionaire and she only has an only child, because she doesn’t want to spend half of her living expenses on another child.

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sense that today's young generation

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to be single. Another factor for decreasing population in a country is that the

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's leading pharmaceutical companies have introduced child protection ways, that limit the growth of

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women. Especially the younger generation is towards these methods, while they get their satisfaction and they control the birth,

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is a new trend among the

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of these addictions, women and men get side effects, as their pregnancy rate reduces. As a consequence of these

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the ability to produce new lives for the

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is extinct. To sum up,

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trend should not be continued by young couples and the

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and families face obvious consequences in the future. It's we who should look after our future by giving birth to new generations

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so that the

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will develop.