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Many people believe that cycling is a healthy and environmentally friendly mode of transport. However, it is still unpopular in many countries. What are the reasons? What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles among wider population?

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Cycling is one of the best exercises to fit our bodies with zero maintenance cost and eco-friendly vehicles. But there are certain countries where it is less popular. In
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 little initiative will be a huge impact on the present and future generations because the result leads to a clean environment and make society fit. In recent ,
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 make parking stand within a distance of 500 meters to 1 km. In conclusion, cycling is the oldest and most used full vehicle it will save money and the environment but it is
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Infrastructure
  • Cycling lanes
  • Traffic congestion
  • Environmental benefits
  • Financial incentives
  • Public awareness campaigns
  • Integration
  • Facilities
  • Safety concerns
  • Social stigma
  • Prestigious
  • Practicality
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