Some people believe that money is the best gifts for teenagers while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people opine that
teenagers
should be given
money
as a gift while others differ from
this
opinion. And
i
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also
think that the best
gifts
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for
teenagers
is
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money
. And now
i
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want to share with you my opinion and
i
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will elaborate
my
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point of view in
this
essay.
First
of all, at the moment all
teenagers
want to give them
money
on their birthday or holidays
,
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because some
teenagers
just don't have enough
money
for themselves.
Secondly
, now many
teenagers
go to
in
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courses or work somewhere,
that is
, they spend almost noon on the street and they want to buy something, so
i
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think that
money
is better for
teenagers
. For
an
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example,
i
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go to
in
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courses, so
i
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need
to
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more than 50
thousands
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a day
,
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so that
i
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can buy something.
Thirdly
, many older people give gifts to
teenagers
, and many
teenagers
don't like it because they give outdoor things.
Although
, we all know that
teenagers
is
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a
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very fragile age now, so providing them with finances is not helpful as they may spend
it
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irrationality.
In addition
, now many
teenagers
go to
the
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club, they drink, smoke and buy unpleasant things with
money
, even some are drug addicts and they develop different bad habits. I think that for
such
bad offspring you need to give some
money
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so that it is only enough for food. In conclusion, buying presents for adolescents
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pros and cons, but in my opinion, the benefits of giving material goods outweigh the drawbacks.
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