Some people believe that money is the best gifts for teenagers while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people opine that

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should be given

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as a gift while others differ from

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opinion. And

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think that the best

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for

teenagers

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money

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. And now

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want to share with you my opinion and

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will elaborate

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point of view in

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essay.

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of all, at the moment all

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want to give them

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on their birthday or holidays

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because some

teenagers

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just don't have enough

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for themselves.

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, now many

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go to

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courses or work somewhere,

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, they spend almost noon on the street and they want to buy something, so

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think that

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is better for

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. For

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example,

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go to

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courses, so

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need

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more than 50

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a day

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so that

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can buy something.

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, many older people give gifts to

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, and many

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don't like it because they give outdoor things.

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, we all know that

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very fragile age now, so providing them with finances is not helpful as they may spend

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irrationality.

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, now many

teenagers

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go to

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club, they drink, smoke and buy unpleasant things with

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, even some are drug addicts and they develop different bad habits. I think that for

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bad offspring you need to give some

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so that it is only enough for food. In conclusion, buying presents for adolescents

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pros and cons, but in my opinion, the benefits of giving material goods outweigh the drawbacks.