Many people believe that it is a good idea to have a dress code at workplaces. ‎Do you agree or disagree with your statement? Give your opinion and ‎examples from your own experience.

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individuals
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individuals
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employment options increased a lot
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last
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two decades.It is a hot topic that
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of people claims that uniform would be compulsory
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all workplaces
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says that it should not be compulsory. I firmly stand with the
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mandatory
mandetory
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mandatory
for all workers of the
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.The below mention paragraphs will explain my views with
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examples. To embark on, the
dress
code
of the
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gives
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unique identification not only to the company but
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equality between all persons who are working with the institute. It
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down the gap between two posts
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organisation
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an organisation
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.
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manager
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and on other hand one is
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, both have the same
outfit
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confidence
confidance
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confidence
to all worker and
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the comfortability in
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the working
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palace. Because if someone is poor and can not buy
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fancy
dress
so he/she can feel uncomfortable with the same
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which he/she wears.So, the
dress
code
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issue.
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Secondly
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Secondly
, if any
organisation
have a fixed costume contrast for all
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employees
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employes
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employees
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it gives a relaxation to
worker
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the worker
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in the form of finance. Because, if
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code
is not fixed
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all
person
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people
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have to come in
casual
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a casual
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outfit
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outfits
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and they
also
have to maintain the standards according to
there
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their
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post
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posts
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and reputation in the office. It
enhance
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the economical
burdan
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burden
on
worker
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the worker
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. But, they have
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fixed
dress
code
than
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no need to purchase new garments for the office.
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, The
outfit
code
of
organisation
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an organisation
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has the
myrid
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myriad
benefits and it
also
help
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in marketing as well. Because when individuals move from
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their
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home to
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the work
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work place
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workplace
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with the same
outfit
than
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then
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people recognise them and
also
search about the
organisation
as well.
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