Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that serious
health
issues are caused by the consumption of high-level sugar products and sugary foods and it is hard to accept in
this
contemporary world, In my opinion, I completely agree with
this
statement. In
this
essay, I will explain my viewpoints in detail in the ensuing paragraph.
Firstly
, we should be aware that
due to
products with high carbohydrate content, the number of people suffering from diabetes has increased, especially among children.
However
, there is no product that doesn't contain carbohydrates to avoid
this
. Something that we can do is promote
health
and the consumption of less sugary food. So that, we could balance the existence of carbohydrates and reduce
health
problems.
For example
, if kids bring a
coke
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Coke
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and a sandwich for lunch at school, parents and teachers could encourage them to play games with other children, so they can take advantage of the energy that glucose brings them and burn it,
this
way they are acting healthy.
Secondly
, increasing the cost of foods with glucose is a good measure to prevent people from going directly to these groceries, making them look for alternatives. An example
that is
related to promoting
health
by raising prices is tobacco. In Spain, the cost of tobacco increased in order to avoid excessive consumption compared to previous years.
Besides
,
this
caused many people to decide to stop smoking, considering ways to quit. In conclusion,
this
is a problem, because we are generating bad habits which will be difficult to get rid of them with the passing of time. In
this
way, the early onset of diabetes is reduced, and by raising the demand, the search for healthier manufacturing is promoted.
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