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In a number of countries some prople think it is necessary to spend large sums of the money on constructing new railway linesfor very fast trains between cities. Otherss believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Public
transport
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people. Some
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the
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societies think that huge amounts of investment
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 made in the
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construction
contruction
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construction
 of new railways whereas few others believe that the money should
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for
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 improving the available
transportation
.
This
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opinions and will reach
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a conclusion.
Firstly
,
construction
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 of new railways where the trains move faster
,
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 would help in the reduction of existing traffic issues.
Additionally
, it supports the idea of extending
transport
 to more places so that more people will have access to
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public
transport
.
For example
, in
Dubai
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 the metro has
been
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extended its stations including
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remote places
such
 as Dubai investment park and Al Furjan, which made
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public life much smoother.
On the other hand
, the whole process involves
huge
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 amount of cash and
this
 could drag the country into a crisis
,
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 if there are no sufficient people who could use the fast metro.
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, the government can improve the facilities of existing public
transportation
.
That is
, the authorities could modify the existing system in each country so that they could increase
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human occupancy.
Also
, developments can be made to increase the frequency of available
transportation
.
For instance
, in
Mexico
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 the
transportation
 sector successfully uplifted the life of the communities by including 10 more routes to the current metro.
However
, these could not be helpful in reducing the time
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 by every single person
in
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 each train, which marks
as
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a downside. In my opinion,
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 of the country would need
implementation
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 of new ideas.
Hence
, I believe that
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fast moving
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 railways should be constructed as a part of
day to
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day
transport
 as it saves
large
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 amount of time.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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