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In education and empolyment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work hardrer ? Is it always a good thing to work hard ?

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Pressure and competition are the biggest problems that lots of
people
 face nowadays.
Therefore
, there are a lot of
people
 who
work
 hard in education and employment.
However
, why do they
work
 harder than others? Is it a good thing that they always do it? In
this
 essay, I will express my opinion. It is obvious that hard
work
 can make life better.
That is
, in education or employment, studying or working hard can play a critical role and lay the groundwork for a successful future.
For example
, working hard can earn more money, can buy anything that they want, and can offer all the family needs. Those who
work
 hard in school can apply to prestigious institutes or find
work
.
Therefore
, education and working hard can get more benefits for themselves.
This
 is why some
people
 are studying or working harder than others.
In addition
, there are more benefits for them because of their hard
work
. If they always do
this
, they will be disadvantaged.
Firstly
, it has been harmful to their health for a long time in high pressure. so that it will injure their minds.
Secondly
, if they are always studying hard or working for a long time, they will not have a good relationship with others. because they always think about competition. Other
people
, in their eyes, are not friends.
Thirdly
, it is not a good thing for the whole society. Let society become more preoccupied since most of the competitive atmosphere is gone. Keeping study and
work
 status is necessary, but there is no need to
work
 too hard. Relaxing and making friends are good ways to communicate.
Submitted by kevin. B on

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