Write a letter to the local authorities for requesting additional sport facilities for your age group in your area?

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am prasuna Kuchipudi,a resident of Tenali ,Guntur . I am working as an assistant manager at HDFC bank ,Tenali. I am writing

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letter to grab your attention to my area for addition of new sports facilities in our area. To commence with,there are multifarious sports centres in Guntur,but in my ,locality there are only a few. Children play cricket and football on the grounds of the Government High school.

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,there is no facility available for teenagers to spend some quality time after coming back from the office to exercise and play. Sir,there is an open ground

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to the school which has become a dumping spot for people to throw garbage and other waste materials.

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area is under the corporation of the city.

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would be an ideal place for an indoor stadium for games like badminton and lawn tennis. I would really appreciate it if you could utilise that place as

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would be very beneficial not only for adults but

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for youngsters who have a very sedentary lifestyle. Hoping for careful consideration of

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suggestion. Yours Faithfully, Prasuna Kuchipudi

prasu.kuchipudiWed Oct 26 2022

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Write a letter to the local authorities for requesting additional sport facilities for your age group in your area?

In order to learn the way other people in world lives, it is better look at film or video recard than documents

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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do? Trung

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