You are getting married. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend to invite him/her to the wedding. In your letter: * describe who you are going to marry, * tell the schedule * explain why it’s important him/her be at the wedding.

Dear Rao, I am glad to know that you are fine I am writing

this

letter to share some important news in my life my wedding.

Finally

, the day has arrived I am going to get hitch my childhood friend miss Annabelle whom you are

also

familiar . I have fixed the date on the auspicious day of Friday which is on 12th July 2022 .On the day of , the wedding there will be a grand party arranged by my family. You can witness loads of fun here. As you know you are no longer an outsider to me as well as my family as we treat you like a family member. Your presence is very much important to us. I know that you are busy with a hectic schedule but we are not going to listen to any excuse from you for not attending the wedding.I and my family are inviting you especially to grace the occasion with your french songs and culture. Hope, you will not miss the occasion waiting to see you at the wedding. Warm regards, Prasuna

Submitted by prasu.kuchipudi on Wed Oct 26 2022

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8 paragraphs

181 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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