Essay topics: Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development?

Some
people
love spending all their earnings rather than saving them for the future.
Such
behavior
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can
be resulted
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result
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from the belief of living in the present or not being able to use
money
efficiently. Definitely
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consuming
coming
cosuming
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consuming
all we have is
mischevious
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mischievous
to our sustainability and by doing so
people
may bring
sufferings
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in the upcoming days of their lives.
To begin
with, a number of
people
are unaware of the fact that their lives may not be the same in the days afterwards. Since it is not possible to see what tomorrow may bring,
people
who are in
great
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position
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today barely think of misfortunes.
Therefore
, they continue
on
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apply
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spending their
money
on things that may not even
necessary
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.
For instance
, buying an expensive pair of shoes to
fulfill
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present
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a present
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desire as s/he is not thinking of any leg injury could be at any time for which
money
need
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needs
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to be saved. Another thing worth mentioning is that despite being aware of the necessity of saving
money
sometimes
people
suffer from ill management of their expenses.
For example
, one may have saved some
money
through
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by
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avoiding
rickshaw
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a rickshaw
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ride from home to
office
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the office
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while
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but
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he ended up spending two times more
money
on smoking unknowingly.
Consequently
, they fail to save
money
as they lack control
on
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their habit and expenditures.
However
, consuming all one has now is
mischevious
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mischievous
to their sustainability while it is always wise to keep at least a little portion of the salary for the
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sake
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of any future emergencies.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation

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