Some people believe that best way to produce happier society is to insure that there are only small difference between the richest and poorest members. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Individuals think that the ideal
way
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wealthy
members
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However
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people
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way
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people
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members
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members
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people
, but they can provide Use synonyms
loan
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the poor
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businesses
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people
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statement
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poor
poors
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poor
people
. Use synonyms
society
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provide
well education to poor children. all the uneducated poor children get Correct subject-verb agreement
provides
good
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a good
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government
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the government
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children
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society
.
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lastly
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way
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happiness
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society
is to ensure that there is less Use synonyms
difference
between poor and rich Use synonyms
members
. I agree with the Use synonyms
statement
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people
have to treat the poor in the same Use synonyms
way
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people
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