Some people believe that best way to produce happier society is to insure that there are only small difference between the richest and poorest members. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Individuals think that the ideal
way
to make a joyful community is to make sure that there is no gap between the weathy
and poorest Correct your spelling
wealthy
members
. However
, I agree with the statement
. In
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this
essay should give your personal point of view and the contrary as well.
To begin
with, I support this
idea because of several reasons. firstly
,people
have to treat same way
to rich and poorest members
of society
. In other words
, people
give same
amount of respect to Change the article
the same
the
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people
who extremely
poor and needy. Add a missing verb
are extremely
this
small bring a
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bring
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brings
happiness
among the poor people
because society
will treat them in same
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the same
way
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status
.
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statuses
For instance
, In America, people
treat everyone with the same kind of and also
does
not give Correct subject-verb agreement
do
a
special treatment to any celebrity. Remove the article
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Furthermore
, people
agree with the statement
that there is a miner difference
between wealthy and middle-class members
of the community.I would like to outline one more impact which brings joy to society
. Government to arrange the house category together of wealthy and poor members
of our community. In other words
, there is no a
specific area for the rich in our Correct article usage
apply
society
. society
should arrange such
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for
people
and the next
is of rich ones. For example
,In Canada, government give a pass the that there is a specific area for poor people
and rich people
and they both lives to
together.
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apply
On the other hand
, some people
disagree with the statement
that this
small difference
cannot bring happiness
to the
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apply
society
. Secondly
, no one can finish the difference
between the poor and rich people
, but they can provide loan
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loans
poor
to start their Correct article usage
the poor
business
. Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
In other words
, banks can provide people
with loans to give them financial support with zero interest.people
have to
support by giving loans that poor Fix the infinitive
apply
people
can also
stand in front of rich members
. For instance
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loan
to everyone. Fix the agreement mistake
loans
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salaries Correct your spelling
whose
below
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are below
than
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apply
pakistan
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Pakistan
rupres
. Correct your spelling
rupees
Moreover
, people
total disagree with the statement
because bring
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bringing
happiness
among
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to
the
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society
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come from Unnecessary verb
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difference
between rich and Correct your spelling
poor
poors
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poor
people
. society
provide
well education to poor children. all the uneducated poor children get Correct subject-verb agreement
provides
good
education, so they can make their lifestyle better and better. Add an article
a good
For instance
, In India, government
announced that education is free for poor Add an article
the government
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child
childs
in Correct your spelling
children
the
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society
.
lastly
, some believe that the perfect way
to produce happiness
in society
is to ensure that there is less difference
between poor and rich members
. I agree with the statement
because people
have to treat the poor in the same way
and there is no specific area for rich people
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