The government has announced that it plans to build a new university. Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your community. Use specific details in your discussion.

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I think it is a great idea to build a new

university

in my

community

However

, I think it is a controversial question whether the building of a new educational institution will bring only benefits to our society. In

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I will analyze the advantages and

disadvantages

this

issue and present my view in favour of establishing a new

university

in my public.

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one side, establishing a new academy in my

community

brings many benefits.

First

of all,

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new construction means more job opportunities. I think it would be good for my

community

because many

people

have to spend much time driving to their work day in and day out because they could not find a job in our neighbourhood.

Second

of all, a new academy is a good

chance

to meet new

people

and I like

this

opportunity. Many students will live in our

community

Finally

, if a new

university

is built in my association there is a big

chance

that I will be willing to enrol in it. I think it is great because it is not far from my place and I do not have to move to another part of the city. Another important aspect of

this

is that

people

from my

community

will have a

chance

to use the new libraries and facilities of a new

university

. For ,example some

people

can take courses and classes there.

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the other side, building a new

university

can bring some

disadvantages

. New construction means noise, traffic jams and different kinds of pollution.

In addition

to these

disadvantages

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young societies in our

community

can cause more noise

especially

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in the evenings. To sum up, I think that I would support the decision of the government of establishing a new

university

in my

community

despite a few

disadvantages

that could follow

this

construction. I believe that a new

university

will increase

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chance

of many young

people

getting a higher education, and gaining more knowledge and experience, which will help them to succeed in today’s world.

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